Fifth grade creative writing

Mrs. Verrill brought this example of descriptive writing to me this morning. Caitlin is a fifth grader who is working on making her writing more interesting.

Breezing, strong and cold like an Alaskan wind, the trees are being knocked down one by one. All of a sudden an odd green truck comes down the windy, long trail of dirt. Crack! Crack! There goes the biggest tree by the littlest wind, landing right in front of the man in the odd green truck. Almost tipping over, the truck screeches to a stop!

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3 Comments on “Fifth grade creative writing”

  1. aaron Says:

    very good story keep up the good work

  2. destiny Says:

    U DO THE BEST WORK

  3. crystal c. Says:

    the cowboy cookie was the best I loved it it was awsome


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